#Dungeon23 weeks 21 and 22 — The Forsaken Parish and the Garden of the Reverend Elect

I gave up on #Dungeon23 mid-June. It was an interesting activity, and I generated a lot of stuff. I don’t think I’ll use that stuff, however:

  1. After half-a-dozen sessions, I stopped running Lunacantium. It just felt… too cumbersome. I want to run and create things that are much tighter – more The Bone Place of Dreib than this. As Bryce Lynch is fond of pointing out, ruined city adventures are hard, and Lunacantium suffered from that. [1]
  2. The core Dungeon23 idea — keep making content, bit by bit — is at odds with how I create… pretty much anything. I write flash fiction start-to-end, but just about anything else I iterate, sketch, accumulate ideas (characters, locations, possibilities) without order or relationship. Only once I have a stable sketch and refined ideas do I put them together concretely, or flesh them out very much. I iterate; I don’t accumulate.

The upside here is that I’ve got enough rough content to fuel months of full-time work on Lunacantium, should I ever come back to it.

Thanks to Sean McCoy for starting the whole #Dungeon23 thing — it was, and remains, a good idea.


[1] I also think there was a tonal problem — something about Lunacantium never felt right to me. I think I was trying to do too much, create too big a thing, and that made control of tone, theme, and feel just too hard. My use of the Dungeon23 accumulative model, and that I was developing the two outer areas under pressure of play, probably exacerbated that.

#Dungeon23 weeks 13 & 14 — Pleasant Valley and Seven Pleasant Houses

Standard request to anyone who plays in my games, or who might play in my games — please don’t read this. You’ll grow a second butt.

I’m still going. Pleasant Valley is interesting, a second kind of “civilian undead” and possible a new leader, albeit and ineffective one. Interactions are interesting to think about… I’ve not really addressed the interaction between this and the Pain Maze to the south. And that maybe makes sense — cast the Queen as protector of the poor and downtrodden (have I done that? I think I cast her as more a pragmatic peacemaker) and cast the Covetous Survivors as the middling-rich who were terrified of that. Hence the fortification of the southern part of this district and the massacre scene on the bridge. Hmmmm.

#Dungeon23 week 9 — Weaselpipe

Standard request to anyone who plays in my games, or who might play in my games — please don’t read this. It’s not right for you.

Moving on to a third district now. This is one I had only a vague image of, and the end result has been — patchy, but with some points of interest. Certainly there’s more going this district now than there was when I started, so that’s good. It’s by no means finished, indeed it’s barely helpful to adlib from, but it’s a lot better than a blank page.

I’m going to play around with how I expand this over the next three weeks… I’m not sure there are three locations here that need 7 sub-locations really. But I’ll probably try.

Should I run more Lunacantium in future, or even publish it, Weaselpipe might feature. And it might look something like this. Or only one of those, or neither.

#Dungeon23 week 5 — The Inner City

Standard request to anyone who plays in my games, or who might play in my games — please don’t read this. You’ll get the bends.

The Inner City is an important area, much more important than the Pain Maze is. It’s the heart of the city, topologically and topographically, and multiple city factions are or at least were based there. This was an area I’d sketched before, however, so the week mostly recapped that. Some nuances but fairly predictable I think if you’d read my other notes. It didn’t feel especially generative.

The next three weeks should be more fruitful, as I flesh out three of these locations. At the moment they are all just vague ideas.

#Dungeon23 week 3 — The Desolate Cathedral

Standard request to anyone who plays in my games, or who might play in my games — please don’t read this. It might ruin the thrill of discovery. And that’s a high-grade thrill, hard to get in the open market.

Third week – another featured location within the Pain Maze. I like this one a bit more than the Winter Palace – it feel more concrete and interesting. Might be because it’s smaller, and thus the locations within it tend to be of more manageable size.

#Dungeon23 week 2 — The Winter Palace

I’ve done a second week of #Dungeon23.

Request to anyone who plays in my games, or who might play in my games — please don’t read this. It might ruin the surprise. You know you love the surprise.

This week I’ve found the stuff I’ve made rather boring. As you can probably see from the above, I’m working at a level between “district of a city” and “topographical map of individual rooms”. It feels like I’m making areas that are simultaneously too small (to sketch a palace using only 7 of them) and too large (to have interesting details).

I do wonder if staying at an abstract pointcrawl would have been better here — it would have encouraged me to think more about “what’s interesting in the palace” rather than “what’s interesting in this broad area that connects here“. Working with interesting points rather than major areas might have been more fruitful.

In any case, I don’t think that matters much — I’m not doing this to make stuff that’s good right now. I’m doing this to (a) have sketches to work from should I suddenly be improv-ing a group in thru of these areas and (b) get over the blank-page barrier and give me something to fix if and when I come back to these areas for serious design work.

And the act of doing this, repeatedly, is probably a good way to learn what works at this level of abstraction. So that’s also useful.

#Dungeon23 week 1

I’ve done a week of #Dungeon23.

Request to anyone who plays in my games, or who might play in my games — please don’t read this. It might ruin the surprise.

The context is Lunacantium — my current open-table game. This month we’re in the southwest district of the city, where the Queen had her Winter Palace and now lies in agony. Tragic figure, the Queen, tried to do sensible things, tried to stop the fuckstupidity, tried to broker peace, and for her trouble was poisoned by her husband and his co-conspirator the Archbishop. A further complication is that, having taken Communion with the Gracetakers, and with that being a bit more necromantic than they realised [1], the poison couldn’t keep her dead. She gets all of the pain, all of the time, forever.

She was beloved to many in life, and so still is in death. Her followers, themselves Meagre Dead from Gracetaker practices, have built a maze around her of barricades and walls and traps. They will let no-one get close to their Queen.

Will I do more weeks? Watch this space. If I do, I expect months to look like:

  • Week 1 — sketch a district in terms of seven key features
  • Weeks 2–4 — flesh out the three most interesting features, giving them seven keyed locations each
  • Any leftover days — sketch a few random encounters

Since I’ve already developed two districts for use in play (at the time of writing, I’ve run six sessions), the twelve months of 2023 should give me a rough picture of the whole city.

[1] I mean, pretty much entirely necromanctic and wholly divorced from the mechanisms used by established church[2].

[2] Notwithstanding that what those mechanisms are is itself quite unclear.